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    Forum » Writers Block » Poems Section » greetings from the stars (one of my many poems i will post them as soon as i can)
    greetings from the stars
    shadesDate: Thursday, 2009-02-19, 2:35 PM | Message # 1
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    to the view of the blissful night , the under the full moon
    my eyes stare at a pretty sight , to it my heart has swoon
    countless are the points of light , that cover our dark sky
    shinning together sparkling in delight, as my soul seeks to fly

    my soul seeking more took take a closer look
    up and away to the great hight..i flied beyond the heavens
    they sparkle in greetings so pretty so the comets spin around me
    the ligher covers my eyes and mind..leaning a trace of memory
    as i dance along with the stars..i shared them my many melodies

    after the greatful greeting and graceful dance
    the moon gave me a most sightful glance
    in its grace and glory as it is in full bloom..all i could do is stare
    in a vision of great wonder..i could no longer be aware

    only to open my eyes..and see my self on the ground..i forgot the stars were so far away
    yet their sight is still there...for me to behold..i shall dance with them again some other day

    hope you like it

    desire leads to passion..passion leads to creation
    creation makes more desire..and the cycle continues
    fear leads to hate..hate leads to destruction
    desturction makes more fear..and the cycle continues
    RavencrowDate: Thursday, 2009-02-19, 10:57 PM | Message # 2
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    Makes me feel sort of sad. The world is so big and I'm so small. The poem reminds me of that,because the stars are so distant. ._. Rambling on...anywho good job on the rhyming scheme. ^^

    Creativity takes courage.~Henry Matisse
    XoNatalieXoDate: Saturday, 2009-02-21, 4:27 PM | Message # 3
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    <3 this one as well ^^
    i hope more comes smile
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